Conrad Rice

Well, this was an interesting piece to say the least. While I can't say that I understand self-injurers, I can honestly say that I have a lot more sympathy for ...

This was an interesting read. I was getting a lot of Jim Jones imagery when I got to the part where Father Brian passes out poisoned tea. At least it ...

A really interesting dual perspective piece, J. I'll admit I like it. Once again, as I always say, you have a thing for endings. Although, I have to say that ...

Interesting story. I liked Ada as a character, I could really connect with her. Julian was crazy/silly, I didn't really know what to think of him. To me, Cole seemed ...

Well, wisemann, this has some good points and some bad points. Good points first. I can say that a child would be interesting in the basic story that you're telling ...

Wow, talk about a pluck at my heartstrings story. I really connected with Colin and Ash, but I didn't understand why Ash was moving really. Were her parents sending her ...

Wow, that was good. I liked the way you set up the Champions of the Dark and Light Angels, and the duality that existed between them. You might consider breaking ...

A nice set of interesting stories. There's a lot of stuff that's left unexplained, but I guess that's alright, seeing as how this is for a contest. I am kind ...

Well, now I know a Polish swear word, ha ha ha. To get to the critiquing part now. I honestly can't see a lot wrong with your story. I liked ...

Well, this turned out to be an interesting opening. Let me see just what I can find. The older man, the one who Kriesler is working for, was a particularly ...

Well, interesting story you have here. I must admit it messed with me, but I will not let that interfere with my review. That being said, I don't think that ...

Once again, a very good story. I like how you showed us something as horrible as a nuclear strike through the innocence of a child's eyes. It is very much ...

Wow. Wow, wow, wow. W-O-W. That was a very interesting piece. It would be kind of interesting to know just how you got your idea for this story. This odd ...

Well, this second chapter was better. When Brad was talking with his friends in the hospital room it felt like real teenage boy dialogue. I liked when you had the ...

I couldn't really tell if the person writing the letter was in an insane asylum or a nursing home. She described everybody there as nutjobs, but that might be the ...